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Sunday, June 08, 2008

since no one seems to be writing, i'll just have to do it myself. humph.

the trees forked across the line of sight, a web of criss crossing birds, leaves and oak. she lay listlessly in the heat horizontal on the sofa, watching disinterestedly as two beetles in holy matrimony slowly, painfully crawled their way across the glass. clouds rolled past, beautiful blessed relief, stunning in the weather change they bring.

rain. rain rain rain and the skies weeping, in joy not sorrow as the world rejoiced with it. i would like to think that men, sweaty and tired after back breaking minimum wage labor also looked up from their dusty bread winning and looked up at the sky and smiled as the first drops broke loose and provided amazing coolness in the oppressive waves of heat. I know for a fact that children broke out from their roles as adult street hawkers, as primary household earners, as naan wallas and seven year old fridge repairmen, broke free and ran, ran ran stripping their tiny man sized kameezes and throwing them at the side of the nehr and jumping, canonballing their first world counter parts would call it, shalwars huge and inflated with comical effect as water and air met in places where the sun doesn't shine, and abandoned the vestiges of hard labor that the third world enforces on them, and they became just that - kids in the rain, washed of all responsibilities.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

By far, the most forced of them all.

Barooq said...

Hey out of curiosity and some superstition, at the risk of sounding insensitive (being is different from sounding), did you go for honeymoon, and if so where?
Do let me know...

Phitaymaun said...

Sounds like lahore to me.
Good to see you writing again, i'm glad i was reminded that there was a time i had the hugest possible virtual crush on someone who inspired me to write a ghazal for her blog title.

Naked feet will live on as one of those combination of words that cause the words to stop being words and become images instead. The kind of images which live on in your perception well beyond your memory and in doing so become anchors to histories we inevitably surrender because either history stops being relevant or we stop being alive.
Mush like the bloated shalwars of canal swimmers, or random comments on random blogs and randomly synchronized timing of said comments which for no particularly valid reason make you feel connected to someone who is as irrelevant to your life as you are to hers. Irrelevant, then, stops using unimportant as a syllable and morphs into something which becomes a little more complex, a little more interesting and a little more comforting than you ever figured irrelevance could be.

Did you know I missed your comments on my posts? Did you know I missed you?

Barooq said...

Its been months again
show up some place, some time